Thursday, January 26, 2017

Secular-Biblical-Historical-Biography?



   The lightning fast rejection by Steven Chudney got me thinking. He wrote that he grew up in Israel. If he is a Jew, is that a factor in his, “not resonating” with the story? I don’t know if Mr. Chudney is a Jew or not or if that had anything to do with his immediate rejection of my query letter. The thought did get me thinking about the potential for a negative bias by Jewish agents and publishers against what they may misconstrue as yet another Christian “Jesus Story,” to add to the long list of anti-Semitic literature of the world.
   How do I avoid, however, having The Merchant of Arimathea categorized as Christian Fiction? I got on Google and found some definitions:

Christian Fiction - Christian authors about Christian Themes. A definite spiritual message as a component

Jewish Fiction - Jewish authors about Jewish themes, either religious or secular

Bible fiction - Works of fiction, which use characters, settings, and events taken from the Bible.

Historical Fiction - A fictional story that is set in the past and sometimes borrows true characteristics of the time-period in which it is set.

Fictional biographies - A sub-genre of Historical Fiction.

   The best fit I can come up with to the above is Hybrid Genre: Secular-Biblical-Historical-Fiction, Sub-Genre: Fictional-Biography.


   What do you think?

Tuesday, January 24, 2017

San Francisco Writers Conference


   I'll be attending the San Francisco Writers Conference Feb. 16th through the 19th. Here's the url for it: https://sfwriters.org/.
   If any of my vast readership will be there, don't forget to look me up!


First Rejected Query - Ouch!


Dear Joseph, 

   Thanks for your query, however, as this storyline isn't fully resonating with me, I'll need to pass on this opportunity. These things are so subjective, and so I hope soon you'll find a more enthusiastic agent for your novel. 

Sincerely, 

Steven Chudney

At least he was prompt - one day.

I once knew a famous poet while I was at Cal Berkely. She told me that she could wallpaper her house with all of the rejection letters she had received.

... the storyline isn't fully resonating...hmmm...

Monday, January 23, 2017

The Post Almost Finished Novel Blues


      Now that I have almost finished my novel (There will be the inevitable edits to come!) and begin turning my attention to how to get it published, the shock of the real world of the publishing business hits. The first “must,” I am learning is that an author must have a “platform.” Thus this blog. I will have to learn how to draw interest to my blog as so far in its brief life there have been no visitors. Also expected is a Facebook page, twitter, etc., not to mention Youtube videos, etc., etc.
   As I pour through the book, “Guide to Literary Agents 2016” I notice that virtually all publishers will only consider a manuscript that is presented by and represented by a literary agent. Now here’s the rub: Most literary agents only consider manuscripts referred to them by other literary agents, or by the "grapevine" or from meeting authors at literary conferences.
   So, in addition to building this blog, I need to plan on pitching my book to agents at various literary conferences around the country.
   Agents are not only interested in a particular book, but in the author’s future books, the ongoing career of the author and how to brand this into some sort of lucrative franchise.
   I just wanted to write a book. Am I really interested in moving into this crazy world of commercialization in order to get it read? I’m not sure. I wrote it mostly for myself, to please myself, and not to make it marketable. Will I write another novel? I don’t know. Do I need a new career? No. Do I need the money? No. Do I need the recognition? No.
   I’m thinking of directing my writing efforts to a blog on the Great Healthcare Scamming of America. This is a topic that I’ve wanted to expose for many decades. I’m thinking of starting a blog on that subject.
   I’ll send out some queries and see what comes of it. I enjoyed writing the novel. I will miss it when it is truly finished. Maybe I’ve established my writing addiction enough that I will continue writing, whether or not I have any readers.

Saturday, January 21, 2017

First Query Letter Sent to Literary Agent Steve Chudney at The Chudney Agency

   Big Step! My first query letter went out to the literary agent Steve Chudney at The Chudney Agency. I picked him for several reasons. First, he grew up in Israel and likes books about the Middle East. Secondly, he will only accept a query letter for the first step. If he is interested he will ask for the synopsis which is well roughed out now. I put it on Google Docs for my daughter, who is my first stage editor to look at and suggest edits/changes. It should be well polished by the time I hear back. He says his response time is 2 - 3 weeks.
   I got his name and address from the "Guide to Literary Agents 2016."
   I am also going to send the query letter today to a new agent, Kurestin Armada at PS Literary as she also accepts only a query letter for the first step. I have read that New Agents may have fewer contacts, but more time to devote to shopping your book. We'll see. I am excited!

Two-Page Synopsis of the Novel

This is the two-page synopsis of the novel required by many agents. It was difficult to squeeze into two pages.  I would appreciate any suggestions.

Synopsis

Yosef of Arimathea is one of a handful of surviving Jewish rebels from the last battle of the Jewish-Roman War at Masada. On the way to Rome for interrogation, they stop on the island of Melita (Malta). There Yosef encounters the former prefect of Judea, Pontius Pilate, who has been hiding there under an assumed name since narrowly avoiding execution at the hands of Emperor Tiberius.
        Pilate offers to help Yosef and his family escape in exchange for the true story of the crucifixion that he ordered of Yosef’s great-nephew Yeshua (Jesus). Yosef agrees, as he needs to remember his story and make sense of it. His narrative begins long before the crucifixion, when the father of the thirteen-year-old Yeshua is killed fighting assassins sent by the High Priest, Annas, to murder the young rightful heir to the high priesthood. Yosef smuggles Yeshua out of the country and takes him on business travels to Albion (Britain), Egypt, and India. Yosef is determined to talk Yeshua out of his belief that he will become the long awaited “Anointed One,” who will save Israel. Yosef decides to teach Yeshua how to become a wealthy and powerful merchant who can protect the family from their enemies by becoming richer and more powerful than they are. One of the wealthiest men in the world, Yosef made his fortune selling tin to the Roman military for making weapons.
As they journey, Yosef reveals secrets of their family history, including the role the powerful fertility drug, Yavrucha (Mandrake) played in the births of Yeshua and his cousin Yochanan (John). In Albion, Yeshua meets King Cunobeline whose business alliance has given Yosef his lucrative monopoly. Yeshua learns tin mining and the secrets of amassing wealth and influence but remains more interested in studying the beliefs and practices of Albion’s Druids and enrolls in the Druid University on the Isle of Glass (Glastonbury). He wonders if similarities he observes between ancient Hebrew and Druid beliefs come from lost tribes of Israel or whether his Abba (Heavenly Father) reveals certain universal truths to the gentiles.
Yosef returns to Judea, to visit Elisheba (Elizabeth) who is terminally ill and in the care of the Essenes at Ein Gedi. In a delirium, she reveals things to Yosef that make him suspect that he is the father of Yochanan and Yeshua having also taken the Yavrucha he had provided to Elisheba and Miriam (Mary) at the time. He knows the fertility drug can also produce confusion and amnesia. Yosef begs for the truth from Elisheba but she dies, taking any secrets she might have kept with her. Yosef brings the news of Elisheba to her son Yochanan at the Essene encampment where he has lived since the Essenes took him in after his father Zechariah died. Yochanan also suspects that Yosef is his and Yeshua’s father but insists this would have no bearing on their missions. When Yosef visits Miriam in the Galilee, she shares her concern about her son’s decision never to marry as he is destined to suffer and die. When Yosef asks if there was anything she never told him about involving Yeshua’s conception, Miriam explains that she had amnesia after taking the Yavrucha and relied on what Elisheba told her. Yosef decides against burdening Miriam with his suspicions.
Upon returning to Albion, Yosef invites Yeshua to accompany him to India hoping to get Yeshua’s mind away from, “Saving the world,” and into the world of commerce. In India Yeshua befriends two Hindi brothers with Hebrew names from a tribe claiming Hebrew ancestry. Yeshua again questions whether these represent lost tribes of Israel. Yosef and Yeshua fall out when Yosef suggests to Yeshua that he may his real father. Yeshua stays behind in India as he refuses to travel further with or accept any more support from Yosef.
There is no news from Yeshua for fifteen years until he suddenly appears back in the Galilee after a three-year walk from India. Yosef cannot travel to the Galilee to see Yeshua as his wife, Anna, is very ill and needs his care. For the next three years, Yosef relies on news about Yeshua brought to him by his sons, Josephus and Mattan who travel between Albion and Israel maintaining the family metals trade.
After Anna’s death, Yosef learns that Herod Antipas arrested and beheaded Yochanan. Yosef now mourns Yochanan also and blames himself for not being there to use his influence with Antipas to save Yochanan. Yosef fears Yeshua is heading for a similar fate and sails back to Judea to protect him.
In Jerusalem Yosef learns from Caiaphas, the High Priest, of a plot to murder Yeshua when he returns to Jerusalem for the upcoming Passover festival. Yosef looks for Yeshua in nearby Bethany, as he knows he usually stays with family friends there during the Passover. When Yosef learns the Sanhedrin bases its charge of blasphemy against Yeshua on his claim to be able to die and raise from the dead, Yosef conducts a covert demonstration of the effects of Yavrucha, which, at high doses produces a temporary death lasting several days. He secretly drugs Eleazor (Lazarus) who falls deathly ill.
Yosef hurries to Jericho in search of Yeshua, bearing the urgent pleas from Eleazar’s sisters to come and save Eleazar from death and a warning of the High Priest’s plot to murder Yeshua. In Jericho, he meets Miriam Magdalena and Matthew and learns more of Yeshua’s ministry. Yeshua tells about his years in India and his studies of eastern religions there. Yeshua confides about a marriage with a Kashmirian woman that ended with her death in childbirth. Yosef asks Yeshua to explain his mission Yeshua explains the coming of the End of Days his Abba’s kingdom on earth, and the meaning of Yeshua’s intended sacrifice.
When Yeshua arrives in Bethany, he appears to raise Eleazar from the dead until Yosef confesses to Yeshua that it was a temporary death caused by Yavrucha. Yeshua forbids any further interference from Yosef in his mission and declines Yosef’s offer to use the Yavrucha to cause a temporary death in Yeshua.
Yosef promises to stay out of any further discussions or plans and Yeshua accepts an invitation to have the Passover meal at Yosef’s house. After the supper, Yeshua and his disciples depart for the Mount of Olives. Later that night, Nicodemus wakes Yosef to inform him of Yeshua’s arrest by Caiaphas, the High Priest. They hurry to join an emergency meeting of the Sanhedrin called by Caiaphas to deliberate the fate of Yeshua. In spite of efforts by Nicodemus and Yosef to defend Yeshua, the Sanhedrin condemns him to death for blasphemy but delivers him to Pilate with the accusation of treason against Rome. Yosef and Nicodemus can only wait and hope Pilate will find Yeshua innocent and release him. In the morning, they are dismayed when they encounter Yeshua on the way to his execution. Yosef decides to break his promise not to intervene. He elicits the help of a Centurion who is a loyal friend of Yeshua’s who agrees to give Yavrucha to Yeshua using a sponge on a stick to induce a temporary death. Meanwhile, Yosef tries to use his influence with Pilate to stop the crucifixion. By the time Pilate finally consents, Yeshua is dead. Yosef places the body in his own family tomb nearby. On Sunday morning, Caiaphas arrests Yosef on charges of stealing the body from the tomb during the night.
When the Centurion visits Yosef in Jail, he admits that he was not sure whether Yeshua drank the Yavrucha from the sponge. He returns the remaining drug, which Yosef drinks to escape his misery. Yosef wakes at home several days later unable to remember how he got there.
Pilate orders the High Priest to back off and Yosef to return to Albion and continue to further Rome’s interest with tin mining. As Yosef prepares to depart for Albion Yeshua appears at his door with the Centurion and Miriam Magdalena febrile and septic from infection of his wounds. They work together to nurse Yeshua back to health and plan for Josephus to help them escape to the Isle of Glass in Albion. He later learns from Josephus that Yeshua insisted on returning to India, however and sailed for Alexandria with the Centurion and Mary Magdalena.
Yosef returns to Albion where he becomes a somewhat unwilling apostle of the Nazarene movement. The growing church finds a safe haven on the Isle of Glass, until Yosef learns that Emperor Claudius intends to invade Albion. Yosef has to decide where his loyalties lie. His daughter has married into the royal family of Briton to king Cunobeline’s son, Caradog. He decides to betray Rome by diverting his metals shipments to king Cunobeline’s army realizing this treason will cost him all of his Roman based wealth and influence. When Rome invades, he joins the Celts as a combatant at the battle of Medway alongside of his daughter, Prince Caradog and his grandson, Prince Arviragus.
The Jewish-Roman War that breaks out claims the lives of his son Mattan, his family, and Miriam’s family as Vespasian lays waste to the Galilee. The siege of Jerusalem traps Miriam inside as General Titus allows only the dead to leave the surrounded city. Yosef sails to Judea to rescue her, knowing Rome may arrest him for treason. He gives her Yavrucha to induce a temporary death and removes her corpse from the embattled city even as the embattled city falls. When he arrives at the coast, he learns from Josephus that his ship is confiscated, and there is a warrant for his arrest. Yosef flees with Miriam his great granddaughter and her five children to a mighty fortress in the desert called Masada. After Josephus insists on returning to Jerusalem to rescue more survivors he does not return and Yosef never learns of his fate.
During his subsequent three years at Masada, Yosef tries to make sense of his life. Having lost most of his family, health and all of his wealth and power, he concludes that he never had control over the fate of his loved ones and failed to protect them. When Masada comes under siege and it is certain the Roman Legion will breach the defensive wall by the morning, the nearly one thousand occupants agree to a mass suicide, to avoid becoming slaves of the Romans.
Yosef decides he cannot allow the Sicarii Zealots to murder the last remnant of his family. He hides them in a water storage cistern, and then takes enough Yavrucha to induce a temporary death in himself. When he awakes finds himself and his family bound for interrogation at the court in Rome. Their arrival on the island of Melita and encounter with Pilate brings Yosef’s narrative full circle.
Pilate then reveals his conversion to Christianity when the apostle Paul shipwrecked on Melita. They agree that Pilate’s questions about the crucifixion do not matter. More important than his death was Yeshua’s life. Pilate arranges for Yosef and his family to escape to Albion. Yosef reveals the secret of the Holy Grail as the ship departs Melita. It is a simple tin cup that Yosef is saving to make into a bird feeder when he reaches the Isle of Glass. He concludes that is what Yeshua would do.

Wednesday, January 11, 2017

First Query Letter


   This is the first query letter that I will send.  I am waiting until I finish writing the synopsis on the novel, as I want to have to have it ready to send if he is interested. If so, he would ask for the synopsis and 4 - 6 sample chapters.
   The synopsis is the most difficult writing task I have ever endeavored. I need to summarize the essence of the story in one or two pages!
   I am tempted to go ahead and send the query letter and assume I will be finished with the synopsis by the time he asks for it. That would certainly turn up the pressure on me to get it done!
   How do you think the following query letter reads? Any suggestions?

Steven Chudney
The Chudney Agency

January 10, 2017

Title: The Merchant of Arimathea
Genre: Historical Fiction Word count: 100,233

Dear Mr. Chudney,

I was delighted to learn that you grew up in Israel. I think you will find this project very much in keeping with your interests in the Middle East.
The Merchant of Arimathea is “the greatest story ever told,” as conveyed through the eyes of its most mysterious character. Yosef of Arimathea is the subject of legends around the world, though in the biblical scriptures, he appears only once very briefly and mysteriously to bury Yeshua, in his own tomb, then disappears and the scriptures never mention him again. Is it possible that he alone knows the truth about what happened on that famous day two thousand years ago?
This historical epic tells the full story of one of the most powerful and wealthy men of his world and how he witnessed the life of the most remarkable spiritual leader of all time. Spanning most of the first century and the then known world, it is a story that takes a human look at his life and that of his great nephew Yeshua.
In the ninth decade of Yosef’s life, he finds himself a prisoner of war as one of the few survivors of the last battle of the Jewish-Roman war – the Siege of Masada. Yosef and Miriam are two of eight survivors from that battle who are in transit to Rome for interrogation. An unlikely encounter on the island of Melita finds Yosef face to face with the former Roman prefect of Judea, Pontius Pilate. Though it is widely believed that Tiberius Caesar executed Pilate four decades earlier, he in fact escaped. He now lives on the tiny island in hiding and under an assumed name. Pilate offers help to Yosef and his fellow prisoners escape in exchange for the “true story” of the crucifixion he ordered four decades earlier and what happened afterward."
“To address your questions would require telling a long story, that I am not sure I remember." Yosef warns the former Prefect.
"Tell it," Publius insists, "We will see what you remember. I want to know what is true. What to believe."
Yosef narrates and discusses the almost one hundred years of his life as the two aged men compare remembrances and try to piece together an understanding of the roles their lives played in this crucial era of history. Yosef’s narrative includes an intimate family perspective on Yeshua’s birth up to the time when he takes his thirteen-year-old, great nephew under his wing following the death of his father, Yosef ben Jacob of Nazareth. The wealthy merchant brings the young Yeshua with him as he travels the world from The Galilee and Judea to Britain, Egypt, and India.
Yosef’s pragmatic approach to dealing with Roman oppression continually clashes with Yeshua’s vision of his life’s mission. Yosef is determined to save Yeshua from what he considers the brainwashing of his religious upbringing, which he is convinced, will only lead Yeshua to a bad end. After a falling out between the two while in India, Yeshua refuses to travel further with Yosef and remains behind in India to study the eastern religions there. Yeshua spends three years walking back to the Galilee via the Silk Road. There he begins the mission that culminates in his crucifixion as seen through his eyes of his great uncle.
Following the crucifixion of Yeshua, Yosef returns to Britannia to escape Roman oppressed Judea. There he finds himself an unwilling apostle in the spread of early Christianity there. At the same time, the Roman invasion of Britannia entangles him into fighting on the side of the Briton Celts. When the Jewish-Roman War breaks out, Yosef returns to Judea to rescue Yeshua’s mother Miriam from the siege of Jerusalem. The two flee to seek refuge at Masada, only to come under siege again by the same army.
I bring to the project four decades of full-time clinical practice as a Child, Adolescent, and Adult psychiatrist. My work involved dealing with the developmental growth of psychologically complex real people. I endeavor to bring this experience to this work of fiction in such a way as to make the story and its characters distinctly human, tragic, funny, sometimes unfathomable, but always believable.
This is my first work of fiction. I have a published nonfiction book, Brainstorms: Understanding and Treating the Emotional Storms of Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder from Childhood through Adulthood. Jason Aronson/Hardcover/1998-01-01/0765700803, Jason Aronson / Rowman & Littlefield / Softcover / 2000-04-01 / 0765702835. Though a medical textbook, the book included fictional case examples that were humorous, entertaining, and illustrative of important medical concepts.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I will be happy to send you additional materials upon your request.

Yours truly,

H. Joseph Horacek, Jr.
Charlotte, NC 28205
Phone: 704 9624523
E-mail:brainstorms@earthlink.net

Monday, January 9, 2017

Map of Ancient Judea, Sammaria and The Galilee


Chapters 3 & 4


Chapter 3

            I should begin many years ago, with a funeral. It was several weeks after the death and burial of Yosef bar Jacob that I finally was able to arrive in Nazareth and visit his burial site. By the time I arrived, the family was in the midst of mourning. I came as soon as I received word, but the journey from Jerusalem took the better part of a week, and custom dictated burial of the body immediately. I missed the funeral and was not able to participate in the procession. I also missed the common meal of condolence.
            The wife of the deceased was my niece, Miriam, the daughter of my brother, Joachim. As her next of kin, I was responsible for her welfare as well as that of her children.
            Yosef’s death had been sudden and unexpected. The word I received was that he died from an accident involving a scaffold while working on a large new mosaic for a wealthy homebuilder in Sepphoris.

***

“Yes, Sepphoris is a beautiful city!” Publius interrupted. “As you know I used to live only thirty miles from Sepphoris, on the coast at Caesarea. I remember often hearing it referred to then as The Jewel of the Galilee. Once Herod Antipas decided to make it his capital, Sepphoris grew quickly as he poured obscene amounts of money rebuilding the city in that modern, lavish Greco-Roman style. But client Rulers needed to build things so everyone would know who the ruler was!" Publius shook his head sadly. “It was my job, then, to keep the people, who were so shamelessly taxed to pay for such extravagances, from rebelling!” He shrugged. “Well, at least rebuilding Sepphoris kept Yosef employed.”
            "Yes," Yosef retorted. "Rebuilding Sepphoris kept Yosef employed so he could earn money to pay his taxes to fund rebuilding Sepphoris!"
            Publius shrugged again. “Welcome to the modern world, the Pax Romana, the “Roman Peace.” That is how it works!"
            Yosef appeared as if he was about to reply, then paused, as if thinking better of it and returned to the telling of his story.

***

            Yosef had often worked in Sepphoris, as it was only a five-mile walk from the Nazarene Essene encampment loosely referred to as, “Nazareth.” He was in much demand in Sepphoris for his crafts of carpentry, masonry, and the creation of large mosaics.
            I had been in Jerusalem when the news of Yosef's death arrived, having only recently returned there from two years at sea trading tin from Britannia and silks from India and the Far East. It had been a long and arduous, but highly profitable, excursion. When I learned of Yosef's tragic demise, I excused myself from my duties at the Sanhedrin and came with four hired guards and six horses. It had not been easy to employ professional guards on short notice, and I had to pay a premium price. Traveling alone along bandit-infested roads, however, was not an option. It was thus two weeks after the funeral that I was finally able to pay my respects to the family, and to offer what help I could. I arrived with my guards on a Friday afternoon, the day of preparation for the Sabbath.
My niece, Miriam, greeted me with her seven children, spaced roughly two years apart in age. The eldest was Yeshua, a young man of thirteen. His younger brothers were Jacob, age ten, Jude, six, Simeon, three, and the youngest was Yose, age two. His sisters, also younger, were Marta, age eight and Rut, age four.
            The family talked all at once trying to piece together the details of the tragedy. The resulting story was that it was because of the falling of a scaffold while he was at work on a mosaic that Yosef was critically injured. A messenger from Sepphoris stopped at the small workshop that Yosef had built next to the house. He found Yeshua there working on a yoke. When he informed Yeshua that his father had been critically injured when the scaffold fell, they came together to the house to break the news to Miriam.
            "I wanted to go to Yosef immediately,” Yeshua complained, “But mother made me stay home to take care for the younger children until she could return. She took Jacob with her to Sepphoris.”
             “No one knew at first how seriously Yosef was injured, “Miriam reported, “but by the time Jacob and I arrived Yosef had died. We brought his body back to Nazareth. The next day, we laid him to rest with his fathers."
            Yosef’s brother Clopas spoke up. “In spite of all of the efforts of my family and the neighbors to comfort Miriam and the children they remain overcome with grief!”
            "Yosef is gone." Miriam lamented. "He was a good husband and father. We will all miss him. He died before we could speak to him or hear his farewell blessing." Miriam became tearful. "He had only one injury, a small wound on his chest no bigger than a scratch as if something sharp had punctured his chest. There was nothing else, not even a bruise. I don’t understand how he could die from such a small wound!” She buried her face in her hands and wept.
            I gently touched the shoulder of my bereaved niece. She took her hands from her face and looked up at me with the eyes of a helpless and bewildered child. "Miriam," I murmured. "May I speak to you privately?"
            “Yes, of course.” She said. The room emptied until we were alone and she closed the door. We spoke only briefly. After we had completed our private discussion, Miriam walked to the door, opened it and called, "Yeshua, please come in here!" As he came into the room, he gave us a curious look. He seemed to know well the tone of his mother's voice and the look on her face when she was about to make a major announcement.
            "Yeshua, your great-uncle is now your father. Obey him as you did Yosef.” Miriam’s voice was firm. “Tomorrow afternoon you may take your Sabbath walk with him to show him the tomb.”
            “The next afternoon, after returning with the family from the small synagogue in Nazareth, I followed Yeshua as he silently led the way up the path to the tomb: a winding, dusty, narrow footpath that snaked up to limestone ridges. These rose steeply around the secluded encampment like the edge of a shell.
            I left my bodyguards at the house to tend to the horses. We would not need them as long as we remained in Nazareth. They would again be on duty when we left Nazareth to travel again via the bandit-infested highways back to Jerusalem.
Yosef had carved the family tomb himself from the limestone so plentiful in the slopes of the hill that rose some five hundred feet above the Nazarene encampment. In the grave, Yosef's body lay on a stone slab, washed, anointed with oils and perfumes, and wrapped in white linen. The corpse would rest there for several years until only a skeleton remained. A second funeral would lay the bones in a small stone box in the tomb. There they would stay, to wait for the company of other family members as future funeral processions eventually carried them up the same narrow winding path to the limestone hilltop.
            After visiting the tomb, we sat in silence outside and gazed across the landscape that sprawled beneath us. The encampment of Nazareth lay in one of the most beautiful places in the Galilee. You could not see any of this view of the surrounding country from the settlement, as it was in a basin; but when you climbed to the edge of this bowl, you could see thirty miles in three directions.          
            I tried to think of something to say to break the silence. “I can see the road that I arrived on yesterday afternoon,” I offered, as I pointed towards the foot of the hill.
            “Yes, the Via Maris, the ‘Way of the Sea,’ Yeshua added. “ It is one of the major Roman roads in Judea and the Galilee. To the north, it connects Damascus with the Mediterranean seaports. To the south, it follows the coast all the way to Egypt.”
            I was sure Yeshua knew I was familiar with this major Roman highway, but he seemed to be trying to make conversation. I tried to keep the conversation going. “One thing you have to give the Romans credit for, they build a good road.”
            A look of contempt darkened Yeshua’s countenance. “Yes, with our money! They tax us at forty percent. That is why Yosef had to start working in carpentry and mosaics - to earn extra money to pay the taxes. Otherwise, they would have taken our land. It’s not possible to keep the land and feed a family when they take forty percent of everything you grow.”
            “He must have been gone a lot working,” I surmised.
"Yes, he was." Life in Galilee is difficult. Many families have lost their land because they were unable to pay the taxes. There is a lot of starvation here. Most families lose half of their children before they reach five years of age. Yosef promised me, ‘We will not lose our land, nor even one of our children!' He worked hard to provide for our family and counted on me to take his place when he had to be away working. When I got older, he started taking me with him and teaching me his trade. By then Jacob was old enough to take over helping mother with the younger children. On the Sabbath, Yosef and I always took a walk together, just the two of us. That is when we had our talks. He would try his best to answer the questions that I had saved for him during the week. He taught me a lot of history sitting right here. You can see where a lot of it happened. To the north, you can see the plateaus on which the tribes of Zebulun and Naphtali lived, and the mountains of Lebanon, and that's Mount Hermon over there."
            The mountain he indicated spanned the border between Syria and Lebanon. Towering above them all, it raised its glistening white snowy peak in majestic splendor three thousand feet above the lower slopes.
            Yeshua pointed out the coast of Tyre, the famous Phoenician seaport destroyed by Alexander the Great, and beyond the coast, the blue waters of the Mediterranean to the West. “That’s where Elijah competed with and exposed the priests of Baal.” He said, indicating the long ridge of Mount Carmel running down to the sea.
            Every inch of the landscape that stretched before us was abundant with history. To the south, there was Megiddo and the whole Plain of Esdraelon, the site of many of the most historic battles of Israel. There was also Tabor and the hills of Gilboa where King Saul committed suicide when the Philistines defeated the Israelites. Mount Ebal and the land of Shechem lay in the background with the uplands of Gilead and Samaria. To the east, one could look across the Sea of Galilee and the Jordan Valley to the mountainous regions beyond.
            Yeshua pointed to the horizon, shielding his eyes with his hand against the setting sun. “To the West, you can just make out the sailing ships on the Mediterranean. You can only see them at this time of day when the sun is going down.”
            “Yeshua,” I began slowly and deliberately, trying to choose my words carefully. "You will be returning with me to Jerusalem. Now that Yosef is no longer with us, I will be taking care of you. Your mother tells me that you have always loved to visit Jerusalem for Passover. Now you will be able to live in this beautiful and most holy city, and you will not have to walk for a week anymore to see the temple. You will be living just a stone’s throw away from it!” Yeshua was silent.
            "I'm sure you know that your mother spent several years of her childhood living in the Temple compound. She loved her experiences and the excellent education she received there. I understand you are quite the scholar for one of your age. In Jerusalem, you will find more students with whom to debate the scriptures than in this little country encampment of farmers."
            Yeshua silently traced a circle in the dirt between his feet with a small stick. He would not defy his elder, but I could see he was not happy about this announcement.
            After a moment, I tried to speak for him. “I’m sure that you are worried about your mother and your brothers and sisters. They will be all right. I will see that they have whatever they need, and your father’s brother Clopas will keep an eye on them. It is best that they remain here in Nazareth to look after the crops.”
            I reached out and placed my hand gently on Yeshua’s shoulder. "I’m sure your cousin Yochanan will be excited to see you. You and Yochanan are practically the same age, and I know you are good friends,” I offered.
            “Yochanan has been living with the Essenes in the desert near Ein Gedi since Uncle Zechariah died,” Yeshua answered as if to remind me.
            “Well, we’ll just have to go into the desert where he lives and pay him a visit.” I stood up and tried to sound cheerful. “The sun has set. Let's head back to your house. We will leave in the morning for Jerusalem. I must be back soon to tend to some urgent business. There is a caravan that passed by on its way to Jerusalem yesterday that we can catch up with.”
            Yeshua dropped the stick in the dust. "I have to be about my Abba’s business. I must discuss this with my mother.” The lad rose from where he had been sitting and led the way along the narrow path snaking down the ridge into the pear shaped basin that nestled the tiny secluded collection of dwellings.
            That evening we ate a simple Sabbath meal of grain, olives, and grapes. We also enjoyed wine made from deep blue grapes grown on trellises on the southern facing slopes. The jars for storing the wine were Galilean-made, milled from local chalk-like soft limestone.
            During dinner, Yeshua tried to discuss with his mother my intention to take him with me to Jerusalem, but she had little to say about it. I could see that he sensed a struggle inside of her. Yeshua’s thoughts were easy to read on his face, which always seemed to express his every thought and emotion. I knew he could sense that his mother wanted him to leave quickly. He also was aware of her great difficulty in letting him go, the holding back of a flood of tears. Yeshua seemed to know his mother well enough to detect that there were important things she had not told him, and about which he must not ask.
            I was sure Yeshua felt he was abandoning his mother and his family. With Yosef often gone in Sepphoris working, Yeshua, as the oldest of the seven children, had provided critical assistance to his mother in helping her care for his younger children siblings. During the time he grew up, his mother was usually pregnant and nursing infants. Yeshua was ten years old when the last child, Yose, was born. Yosef had to work hard to keep his growing family fed. Miriam could not travel with all those youngsters. She had to stay home with Yeshua assisting her when Yosef was away working. Yeshua was not sure Jacob was ready to take over these responsibilities yet.
          In any case, the issue was not open for discussion. Before Yeshua knew it, it was early Sunday morning and I was calling him out of bed and telling him to saddle up.

Chapter 4

            We left at first light. It was still dark and chilly outside, and the moon illuminated the hillside as we finished packing our provisions and saddling the horses. Miriam gave Yeshua a reassuring smile as he mounted his steed. “You look so handsome and grown up riding such a big animal!” she exclaimed proudly as she handed her son a packed lunch to eat while we rode. “Don’t forget to eat!” she urged.
           “I didn’t get to say goodbye to everyone.” Yeshua apologized to his mother. “Will you say goodbye for me, especially to Jude and Marta?” Miriam nodded. Tears filled her eyes in spite of her best efforts to hold them back. “And tell Jacob for me that he is now the man of the house until I return.” Miriam again nodded her promise to do so as we left her standing in the dim morning light in front of the small rock and mud house that until two weeks before had sheltered her husband and all of her children for the last time.
            Yeshua had never ridden a horse before, but he had ridden his share of donkeys and seemed to take to the transition with little difficulty. From Nazareth to the Via Maris was about six miles. The hired guards escorted us with two preceding and two bringing up the rear. We proceeded down the hill in single file by way of a small, winding footpath.
The guards looked formidable. Each guard wore a bronze helmet that flashed in the moonlight. Hinged cheek plates, also of bronze, were tied together snugly under the chin. Arrow-deflecting segments of metal joined by bronze hinges protected the torso. On the right side, a long sword in a scabbard hung from a belt flung over the shoulder. A short dagger belted to the left hip, and a long lance in the left hand completed the weaponry. Armed for fighting from horseback, their weapons had a long reach. Any attacking bandit approaching on foot would be easy prey.
            This narrow path had made trading dangerous and impractical for the secluded encampment near the top of the Nazareth ridge, far from the reach of trade caravans. Life was thus predominantly local. Travel was dangerous. People moved about little. When they did go to the city for festivals or markets, family members or friends accompanied them with clubs and staffs. Some Galileans might make the lengthy pilgrimage to Jerusalem by traveling with large caravans that had hired guards. Our aim was to connect with such a train before dark.
            We had not been traveling for more than an hour when the path threaded through a shallow rocky ravine that was so narrow you could almost reach out and touch both sides at the same time. The dawn was just breaking, turning the sky from a deep blue to a light pink. About midway through the crevasse, we encountered a man lying face down on the path who appeared to be dead.
            “Keep a watchful eye,” I warned. “He could have been murdered by bandits!” Before I could stop him, Yeshua was off his horse and at the man's side, crouching down to see if he could be of assistance.
            “Yeshua, leave him be!” I shouted. “It could be a trap!”
            Before I could get all of the words out of my mouth, bandits leaped from the rocks above onto the mounted guards, pulling them to the ground. Once on the ground, the guard’s long swords and lances were worthless. The assailants slew all four guards before a single one of them could unsheathe his dagger. Their blood drained quickly and joined as one trickle that snaked its way down the path, quickly disappearing as the limestone dust eagerly drank it. The "dead" man got up, cackling over how we had fallen for his trick.
            I had pulled my sword but to no avail. The bandit put his knife to Yeshua’s throat and commanded that I drop my sword to the ground. I complied, and my blade clattered as it hit the stony path.
            A dozen bandits mounted on horseback surrounded us. They dismounted and quickly stripped the slaughtered guards of their armor and weapons.
            The leader of the bandits rode up, looked us over, and, mocking us, proclaimed,   "Well, what have we here? We have a well-dressed man and six beautiful horses! Now, what amount of treasure would warrant such a heavily armed escort? Looks like today's our day, boys!"
            By this, he meant it was their time to take back the monies they felt had been robbed from them and of the robbing of their livelihood and land by the Romans. Farming families just barely subsisted growing the food they needed. The heavy taxes caused many to lose their land and thus their livelihood. Some turned to itinerant trade work, others to fishing, some to begging, and still others, to banditry. Parents sold daughters into slavery to pay tax debts, and women became prostitutes or begged. Once a family lost its land, they almost never got it back.
            "Are you a tax collector?" The leader asked with a sneer. Jews hated tax collectors not only for collecting the resented taxes but also because they usually forced the collection of even larger amounts than due so that they could pocket the difference. The taxpayer had no recourse as the Roman soldiers enforced collection of taxes. Jews considered other Jews who became tax collectors for Rome to be the worst kind of traitors.
            “I am just a humble merchant who is bringing my nephew with me back to Jerusalem from Nazareth due to the recent death of his father. Your presence here justifies the need for guards to assure our safety. We have no money. We just want to travel to Jerusalem safely.”
The head bandit laughed. “I hope you did not pay too much for your armed escort. They did you little good!”
            “Please allow us to pass in peace,” I begged. “The boy has suffered enough with the death of his father not two weeks ago.”
            “You say this boy is from Nazareth?” The bandit turned to Yeshua. “What is your name, boy?”
            Yeshua was mute with fear.
            “His name is Yeshua!” I offered.
            “Let the boy speak for himself!” The bandit insisted, holding up a hand to silence me.
            “Never let others speak for you, boy. Now, again, what is your name?”
            “Yeshua.” He answered his voice barely audible, his face pale.
            The bandit moved his mount closer and peered down at the lad, his eyes narrowed with interest.
            “Was your father Yosef bar Jacob?”
            Yeshua nodded silently.
            “And your mother is Miriam bat Joachim?”
            “She is.”
            “Adonai, forgive us!” The leader exclaimed as he dismounted and dropped to the earth and bowed with humble respect to Yeshua. All of the bandits followed his example.
            The angry and challenging manner of the band of thieves evaporated. Suddenly humble and gracious, they admonished me for traveling without an adequate escort.
            “You should know better than to be traveling alone in these parts,” the leader scolded me. “There are many bandits and other desperate people about who would kill you just for your horses. You must not put the boy at such risk. He is our greatest hope. You must always assure his safety. Four guards, even professional ones are not enough security, as you have seen today. I must insist that we escort you safely to a caravan that is not far ahead on its way to Jerusalem. You must join this procession if you are to be safe. Always travel with a large and well-armed group.”
            I did not comment that this had been our plan before the bandits molested us.
            The head robber addressed Yeshua. ”Your father was a brave man and died well. Please accept our heartfelt condolences.”
            Yeshua gave me a look of complete shock and bewilderment.
            It was close to sundown before we caught up to the caravan. We had known for some time that we were getting close. The odor of sweaty men and animals and various excretions that the convoy left lingering in the air became stronger; the piles of dung on the road fresher. The tail end of the train finally came into view in the dim of the evening twilight.
            The leader of the bandits raised his arm and pointed. "There it is!" The thieves came to a halt.
            We could easily see why the villains would come no closer to the caravan. A sizable number of fierce-looking guards armed with spears and swords, maces, bows, and arrows accompanied the procession of several hundred donkeys, camels, and pedestrians.
            “Now, please excuse us as we bid you farewell.” The head bandit said as the mob quickly spun around. “May Adonai be with you!” He exclaimed.
            The bandits disappeared back into the landscape as quickly as they had first appeared, taking with them the four of our horses that the killed guards had ridden.
            Yeshua appeared visibly shaken. Death was not new in his experience, but I doubted he had ever seen anyone murdered before. I could see that the killing of our guards and the sudden change in the attitude of the bandits had Yeshua profoundly affected and confused. He remained silent; his face still pale from fear and shock. I knew I needed to have a talk with him and soon.
            After we had taken a place in the procession, we spent the remainder of the day's light passing mile after mile of olive trees, planted in groves along the road. Our first day's journey concluded with the caravan's nightly routine, the setting up of the night's encampment. As night came upon us, donkeys and camels were unloaded, tents pitched, carpets spread, fires lighted, guards set, and beasts fed and watered from a nearby stream.
            Soon many campfires blazed, and after a meal, groups of travelers huddled around the fires hugging their warmth and entertained each other with conversation, debate, news, and details of elaborate adventures that provided unending amusement for the weary travelers. The first night Yeshua recited the story of Abraham to the group that surrounded our fire. A diligent student, Yeshua had committed the Torah to memory. He found an interested audience, since many in the caravan were of Hebrew descent but incompletely schooled in the Torah as well as much of their Hebrew heritage. Most could not read or write and had heard at best bits and pieces of stories handed down orally around similar campfires.

            After a time, as the fires burned low and the groups of sleepy travelers disbanded into their tents for the night’s rest, I found myself alone with Yeshua by a dwindling fire.

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